13/6/2011 - Luke

Recently I have been writing up the initial ideas and then given them to mark, where he has then made the document look a lot more presentable, as well as adding his own ideas that he had discussed.
I have also been going onto other groups blogs and adding comments, but this has become a slow process at the current time, due to a problem with posting comments. Once this is sorted however I will get round to posting comments, as for now I have been writing a draft of what to post on the other groups blogs.

Example of a comment we posted on B.R.O.M.A's media blog giving them feedback.