23/1/2012 - With Child (Final Draft)

23/2/2012 - Magazine Review (Final Draft)

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We have made some amendments to the Magazine review, fixing a few sentence structures and adding a paragraph about the producer's future.

29/1/2011 - Magazine Review (Draft 3)

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We have added an interview and compressed the writing in to a small space (1 page) so the review is brief and won't give to much away. This also gives a more realistic view as a short film would not be featured across 4 pages.

21/11/2011 - Magazine Review Draft 2

Here is the second draft of our magazine, we have made corrections from the feedback recieved; correcting mistakes and improving sentence structure.

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7/11/2011 - Magazine Review Draft 1

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Here is the first draft of the magazine review, we have followed the layout from Empire magazine and Sight & Sound along with the language used to interact with the audience. Feel free to give us feedback so we are able to improve on the task.

6/10/2011 - With Child (draft 1)

If there is anymore feedback offered, it would greatly help us with the completion of our final cut.

2/10/2011 - With Child Poster (Final Draft)

We simply changed the tagline as suggested from our suggestions. This could be a possible final draft.

28/9/2011 - With Child Poster (Draft 2)

Here is our second draft film poster, that we created using ideas from other researched film posters. We would like some feedback so we are able to craete the final draft. We were perhaps looking at trying to create the offender in a hood with a black or white plain background to give the idea of a rape in the film.

27/6/2011 - Poster

This image was taken by Mark and edited by Chris in photoshop. Any feedback on this would be helpful to edit it further for full effect, thank you!

17/6/2011 - With Child (scene 2)

Here is part of our Media video. This is the second scene of Lily coming home to her husband after being assaulted, to hide in the bathroom from fear and to wash away her pain.

Please can we have as much feedback as possible. Any suggestions on improvements would be greatly welcomed.