Monday, 21 November 2011

21/11/2011 - Magazine Review Draft 2

Here is the second draft of our magazine, we have made corrections from the feedback recieved; correcting mistakes and improving sentence structure.


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2 comments:

  1. Lewis R23 November 2011 at 10:38

    Keep on uploading updates, guys. It's useful to track the developmental process. You could also add verbal feedback that you have been given in class.

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  2. Ben Fawcett5 December 2011 at 14:16

    It is very clear you have researched the codes and conventions of film reviews throughly and have implemented them into your own aswell as correcting all the mistakes from the first draft. Keep up the good work!

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