After showing our second draft of our film in front of a small audience we received a lot of positive feedback. The audience felt the rape assault was a lot better and stronger when reaching out to the audience's emotion. They enjoyed the blurred screen when the rape was taking place as well as the new dip to black screen with the cries of Lily and the viscous voice of the offender are still heard. This is quite emotional and has shown a massive improvement with the assault compared to before.
The audience also like the bathroom scene and the blurred out focus view of Lily's vision looking at the shower. This gives the impression that she is crying and ill. The backing track also appealed to the audience whilst they stated it adds to the emotion and makes the short story very strong, revealing the true genre and meaning of the film.
We will be creating the final draft shortly whilst fixing the flash of green that appears half way through the film from exporting. We will also adjust the unsteady movement in some shots caused from the stabilization tool in Final Cut Pro.
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