Monday, 9 January 2012

9/1/2012 - Short Film Feedback

Feedback on Short Film

  1. Make the font capital letters
  2. Start goes out of focus for a bit however we simply do not have the time to re-film
  3. Charlotte began to slow down as if she was expecting to get assaulted - perhaps cut the last part
  4. Bathroom scene is very effect, a lot of the audience like the blurred vision and brilliant acting from Charlotte
  5. Uncomfortable watching however this proves it is effective and realistic
  6. Good quality DVD playback
  7. Video was fluent and professional
  8. Have the shot focused on the ring straight after the fade to black transition - remove the shot of Charlotte being thrown to the ground
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1 comment:

  1. Lewis R11 January 2012 at 10:33

    Proof-read this post and make your feedback points as clear as possible.

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