9/1/2012 - Magazine Review Feedback

Feedback on Magazine Review

1. Include an interview
2. Some sentences wern't structured well
3. Picture taglines are too vague
4. Pictures are effective and show the most important scenes of the short film
5. Sounds like an essay format
6. Star ratings are cleverly used showing the conventions of a film
7. Magazine looks professional
8. Remove what the characters dress like
9. The audience disliked the fact that the behind the scenes section included us talking about the lack of time
10. The names were confusing because a few times we included the actor's name in brackets whilst other times we incuded the character's name in brackets